I think about Mary,
The pieces of her story
As I know it:
Her childhood streets,
...
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Damn. I clicked a five by accident when I was trying to give this a ten. Uriah, you really aim for the pain and don't flinch or hold anything back. I am a fan of poems that are direct, as yours are, poems that don't leave me scratching my head wondering why anyone bothered in the first place. You deliver the goods in this one.
you are really developing as a poet, Uriah. the last few poems you've posted have been heavy and powerful. this is no exception. superb. Jake
Powerful poem, Uriah. Heartfelt and full of emotion. Excellent. Hugs, CJ
Especially heartfelt and a great tribute to a strong woman. She surely likes it.
That is a real tribute to our Mary Uriah, bless you, you have a very kind heart, Love Ernestine
A very beautiful poem Uriah....I'm sure Mary enjoyed it more than anything! ! !
Uriah, this is so beautiful! I feel like you've really gotten to know me. I treasure our friendship more than you know. You have touched my heart. Thank you for this poem. You are so special....you should know that. Sincerely, Mary
profound on so many levels...thank you for this