I Think I Lost Something, But I Don'T Know What It Is Poem by Luvo Mjayezi

I Think I Lost Something, But I Don'T Know What It Is

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I keep looking but I can't find it. I keep turning my head from side to side and yet I see nothing.
I knock at at every door I see but when the doors open, there’s nobody there.
Just an empty dark room.
I call out at the peak of my voice and all I hear is the echoing sound of my voice. I think I lost something, but I don't know what it is.
All I know is that I keep seeing glimpses of pieces of it in my mind.
My heart has yet to put together the puzzles of these pieces.
Whatever it is, I hope I find it and if not I'll just keep looking.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luvo Mjayezi 24 November 2011

Thank you, all. I really appreciate your comments. It is really nice to see that there are people who understand and can relate with my poems.

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Sajna Kailas 19 November 2011

i think i also lost something, but i know what is that! it is my heart! ! yes, i lost my heart while reading this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! good work! keep it up! ! ! ! ! !

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Ramesh Rai 17 November 2011

brilliant idea and a brilliant poem keep it up

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 15 November 2011

i think this poem has a true wave which many of them try to solve in their life time. one of the best poem at my eye lid. brilliant.

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