I Try To Forget Poem by Reihaneh Jalalian

I Try To Forget

Rating: 5.0


I was praying, I was crying when I was praying

I closed my eyes
I didn’t let my tears fall
I was breathing but I couldn’t talk
Cause tonight you broke my heart

Inside of me, Sunset
With no sunrise
The ray of light
That you turned off
You promised me to go
But tonight you said no

I was praying, I was crying when I was praying
Then
I said nothing
My head was down
Tears were slipping on my cheek
I was forgetting to forgive you
But I forgave

I forgave you to get out of the darkness
And
To be born again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 15 March 2009

A very touching page of sorrow, tender lines of weeping words Lovely piece

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Mohammed Albalushi 15 March 2009

touchable poem alot of pain, well write dear

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sky dreams 18 April 2009

very captivating.. its really deep and sad, with that glimmer of hope at the end, great job on this one

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Oluko George 16 March 2009

So catching a poem is.We can feel you cry with you, and even forgive him!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 15 March 2009

very lovely! keep writing!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 15 March 2009

rebirth after forgiveness, thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing

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James Nall 15 March 2009

Very good! Writing our feelings is very difficult. you did a fine job, i gave you the 10 you deserved. please read my SECOND CHANCE

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