Maybe A Dream Poem by Reihaneh Jalalian

Maybe A Dream

Rating: 5.0


Deep in the night
Everywhere at home is dark
No lights
No candles
I open the window
The stars are shining
The moon as well
And I see a comet
Then I wish I could fly
I'm winging near the moon
While my eyes are close
I sit on a piece of cloud
And I feel something a little close
The invisible sun is beside me
Holding my hand
He is telling me something he had in his yellow heart
A dream to be with the moon only one night
Sun sends her his true love every night
To show her that he keeps her always on his mind
The yellow sun wants to take a chance
To tell the moon everything about the first glance
Suddenly I open my eyes
Then I see that it was only a dream
Outside of the window I take a look
O, moon is shining more than ever, look!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
sky dreams 18 April 2009

beautifully written.. sun and moon together are basically perfect for the meaning your getting across.. great job!

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Kite Remedy 15 January 2009

Nice work, such a stellar imagination.. I like it.. Best Wishes, Kite

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 08 January 2009

'He is telling me something he had in his yellow heart A dream to be with the moon only one night' cosmic and beautiful, thanks for sharing 10

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Joseph Poewhit 08 January 2009

Something how the moon has fascinated for times untold.

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