</>Things are neither delicious to eat
Nor disgusting to vomit
Everything is tasteless
Whenever I turn around to check the things around
I can hardly see anything
All things had turned colorless
A funeral of all my children, Joy, Pain, Hope, and Torment
Is there at the moment
Oh, I'm childless!
All the castles I've built for everything in me
Are now on ground..Damn!
I turned them homeless
Paralysed I am
No sensation of grief I feel
Nor happiness
Laughing at a time
Crying then once
As if i'm mindless
Look at the sky which waited my complaints to offer a cuddling
As if i heard that tonight a moon would bethere
But i can see nothing.It's moonless!
Oh my heart!
Where are the burdens that caused you pain? !
Even pain had turned painless!
I don't know if life is changing till this extent
Or upon my vision to life a curse is.
Would it be that everything is alright and upon it is a bless?
So confused to predict and so hard to focus is..
Once up once down..So scattered myself is..
I can't even tell if i'm conscious or i have lost my consciousness
I guess i'd rather stop thinking
Take a turning
And go somewhere else.
Nice poem and rhyming. The words are used in a nice manner. Maybe some spacing and divisions are needed to make the poem separated into a sequence of thoughts, so it would be easy for the reader to digest. Great work.
you convey your emotions quite beautifully Rania, i can sense your pain (or lack of it, -numbness, anesthesia)
You have poignantly expressed a feeling of pain and suffering. But why is so much sadness? Relish it? Or just getting relieved of it? At your age such sad feelings occasionally overtake people. Dont worry. But as a poet u have done ur job excellently.
A very painful and desperate feeling....but yes, you have to' take a turning and go somewhere else'this is much better...Very Good poem Rania. A TEN! !
i quote: '' Take a turning, And go somewhere else ''.. here we are waiting to read your poems, that what i can witness ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Only time will tell, this is a well penned poem, heart touching, keep it up, it is just the beginning,10+++