Abdallah Gamal

Rookie - 342 Points (8/June/1995 / Egypt)

I Wanna Be There, Do All What I Can, Only For Her! ! - Poem by Abdallah Gamal

What if the sun said ' Sorry, I'm not coming today '? !
What if the earth loved the moon, and couldn't even say? !

What if our glowing sky wasn't true? !
What if my beautiful life was without you? !

I wanna be there, do all what I can, only for you!
I wanna be there, because I can't dream without you!
I wanna be there, because you're the one who can make my life glows!
I wanna be there, just because I do love you! !

Now! I'm on the summit of the mountain saying to my lifelong pain ' Good bye! '.
playing with the glowing stars, flying freely in the sky.
That's because I said what was stuck in my heart, I was about to die.
So I put the start of our story, and let my birds to fly.

Comments about I Wanna Be There, Do All What I Can, Only For Her! ! by Abdallah Gamal

  • (12/31/2016 1:47:00 AM)

    Only for Her
    A message of profound love, yearning, and joy. This is a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Khaoula Basty (8/11/2015 4:34:00 PM)

    You taught me how to live, how to love, how to sacrifice.
    Till you came into my life, my world turned to a paradise.

    I wrote our story on the walls of my heart, to tell it to our children,
    to teach them what true love is, and let our souls rest in Heaven

    Waw I relly enjoy it when I'm reading It is well penned Bravo! !
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  • Cierrah Smiles (9/3/2012 12:03:00 AM)

    I like the first two verses... how you asked a question. I have tried poems like this and it didn't work but yours did. Good Job. (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2012 7:09:00 AM)

    'So I put the start of our story, and let my birds fly'
    That's my favorite line.
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  • (8/22/2012 9:44:00 PM)

    I completely adore this poem. Such beauty and feeling. I loved! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Persephone Taylor (8/22/2012 7:35:00 PM)

    I love the ryhme scheme and description! (Report) Reply

  • Sherry Painter (8/22/2012 6:57:00 PM)

    Very well writen, Abdallah! Nice, good to see a new one from you, can't waite to read the next poem of yours :) ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 21, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 21, 2012

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