I was like a withered flower in a barren desert,
till I breathed your smile that brought life to my heart.
I was like a homeless child looking for a shelter.
till you got me in your heart, awh nothing is much better.
When I saw you, I felt my heart flying freely in the sky.
I said ' Angels don't exist, could she be a butterfly? ! '.
I waited a long time for the one who will wipe tears stuck in my eyes.
Then I met you, and to my lifelong loneliness said 'Good-bye'.
You taught me how to live, how to love, how to sacrifice.
Till you came into my life, my world turned to a paradise.
I wrote our story on the walls of my heart, to tell it to our children,
to teach them what true love is, and let our souls rest in Heaven.
You definitely know how to make a fine poem, this is a brilliant write, i love to see the growing side of your poetry themes and skill, they always good and new..dont stop writing, your emotion is always been writing since then, and your black pen is birthing gold in few more years_Soul
spoken as only a true poet can. well done
abdllah, go on dreaming and sharing
Ah l'amour, l'amour! I like the images you use and you tell your story so poetically. Lovely poem full of sweet romance..
A poem with true feeling, nicely written.
This is a beautiful poem [3
It's a lovely and romantic poem with wonderful touching images, sounds like love at first sight. I hope the love they share lasts forever.
This is a beautiful poem! Love the way you write, and how it is depicted in a few word, but holds a strong message. Lovely! Keep writing on!
Greatest short romantic poem...truly i really loved this, you touch every beat in my heart, i know everyone will also feel the same_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
A poem written from a heart in love...free...wonderful...