abhimanyu kumar.s

Gold Star - 12,061 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

I Wanna Be With You - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

I want you
I want to walk with you
I want to talk
I want to talk to you
My heart wants
My heart wants your heart.

Will you walk
Will you walk with me
Will you talk
Will you talk to me
Your heart wants
Your heart wants my heart.

When all is set
Why you wanna leave
My lady you are mine
My dear am always yours.


Comments about I Wanna Be With You by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • (11/16/2011 6:12:00 AM)

    hmm she will be yours and you will be hers but she? (Report)Reply

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  • (11/9/2011 4:42:00 AM)

    my lady you are mine, my dear am always yours brilliant 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/25/2011 5:17:00 PM)

    This poem is amazinq I love it<3 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/25/2011 5:17:00 PM)

    This poem is amazinq I love it<3 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/17/2011 8:09:00 AM)

    I love love poems..i like this one! (Report)Reply

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  • Louis Cecile (8/1/2011 9:30:00 AM)

    Quite simplistic form and brave to use such long repetition. Again a piece leaving the reader wanting more expression. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/24/2011 1:56:00 PM)

    Well a good logic of writing this poem you adopted and seems fine also... but there should be some modification and editing so make ait a bit long, so that a complete sense of this poem could come ouside as apparantly as crystal and it will add to your poetic talent.

    oterwise it is upto mark.
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  • (6/9/2011 12:22:00 AM)

    a very interesting form used (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 27, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, May 27, 2011


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