I Want To Be A Cloud Above You Poem by Cristina Teodor

I Want To Be A Cloud Above You



I want to be a cloud above you,
To travel in the world,
To be on highest sky,
Nearest stars and moon.

Wind to be my carrier,
Sun to be my warmth,
I am just a cloud filled with memories,
On the infinite sky of life.

I am balancing my wings everywhere,
Seeking for peace and love,
Following you wherever you go,
Seeing you near brings me relief.

I am for you only a memory,
In an ocean of happenings of your life,
I 'll be always above you watching,
My tears will always fall to you with my love.

Monday, September 26, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love,missing you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Krueger 25 October 2011

I love the wording in this and how you described everything so perfectly. It is a very humple and peaceful peice :)

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Rekha Mandagere 07 October 2011

Humble, heart touching poem. The imagery is so beautiful and balancing the delicate emotions. Nice poem.

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Unwritten Soul 30 September 2011

Soothing, serene and peace, i like the feel you left on this write...it seems real and a really smile craving to whom read it.. :) The cloud and the wind such a team of great subject you have used here..and the last line is the biggest part in this poem..Like it, sweet poem to read.. :) _Unwritten Soul

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Vipins Puthooran 26 September 2011

Nice poem, very imaginative... Please take a glance at my poem(A dream)

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