I Want You Back Poem by sania harris

I Want You Back

Rating: 5.0


Sitting by the river
Dreaming through my reflection
I wonder what has happened
What has caused this distance

We used to be together
Cuddling close to each other
What came between our beautiful love?
I don’t know, though I wish to

I can see you now, not alone
You’re holding a hand, that’s not mine
Where am I? Why not next to you
Why am I away? I don’t understand

You’re smiling to the fullest
I am not the one making you happy
You are glancing at someone else
Why is it not me?

Seeing you after such a long time…
My heart sighs again
Some thing inside me growls loud
Cause now your hand runs thru her hair

I stand some distance well away
But the surroundings disappear
When I look at you, I feel lost inside
I wish you back, my angel

There you are, holding her hand
And I am lost, trying to understand…
I want you back, I really do
Just to hold your hand
And walk with you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelvin Karani 27 March 2009

I want you back. That's what we tell to all those who choose to leave us. There is nothing more to say: I want you back

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puneet ambika 17 November 2008

well composedi like the opening lines.....Your words sound quite matured in most of the poems so far I've read...you sound talented..and this poem too a great piece..keep writing 10 +.... god bless may u get all tht u wish thnx 4 redaing my poem ambika

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 November 2008

Oh such a sadness..............but the lights of prevailing is still looming for you i'd hope.Take a lil while though.Good job Sania!

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butifully written ur hurt emotions...hope u gt ur love back.... true love cn nva die

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