sania harris

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Daddy's Darling...Or Not - Poem by sania harris

A tear dropp fell today
From a childs innocent eyes
The reason, I know not
Might be of fear, terror and lies

A tear dropp fell today
Unnoticed and forgotten…
From her blue azure eyes
It lay silent, fear gripped

Usually tucked into bed
Happy, content, fully fed
Kissed and tenderly hugged
Memories remaining
And they are fading

Nothing‘s the same right now
Things changed, don’t know how
Her eyes are gripped in fear
Reason hidden beneath her tears

Her young body is frail
Her footprints leaving a trail
She wonders what has happened
Her daddy, he has changed

She is touched, not by love
Nowhere, she sees a peaceful dove
She is destroyed, by her trusted man
To breath, she tries, she can’t

Daddy’s darling has changed for worse
Daddy’s darling is gone
Daddy’s darling is bitterly cursed
Daddy’s darling, gone with the wind

A tear dropp falls from her eyes
Falls to the harsh ground
It rolls slowly down her cheeks
It breaks…! ! !
And the memories wash away

Comments about Daddy's Darling...Or Not by sania harris

  • (3/11/2009 2:04:00 AM)

    well sania i dont know whether the poem is autobiographical or not i hope not but a lovely write shows how much you love ur dad :)) (Report) Reply

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  • (12/1/2008 11:44:00 PM)

    ohhhhhhhh such a sad lovely poem.......well penned (Report) Reply

  • Ravi Sathasivam (11/30/2008 10:27:00 PM)

    Your poem is penned beautifully and very touchy too.
    Keep up.
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  • (11/30/2008 8:47:00 AM)

    a very touching poem, Sania...plz..keep on writing...u're a gifted one...and ur standard is beyond ur age... (Report) Reply

  • (11/19/2008 9:37:00 AM)

    This is really a good poem. (Report) Reply

  • shygirl 93 (11/19/2008 2:53:00 AM)

    great job sania.keep writing (Report) Reply

  • (11/19/2008 2:31:00 AM)

    interesting read! really hope it is not by personal experience. beautifully illustrated! (Report) Reply

  • (11/18/2008 11:34:00 PM)

    very moving glad you decided to share your work with me...this was the first time i recieved your write well...with pain in your many poets do....well done. (Report) Reply

  • (11/18/2008 4:33:00 PM)

    Very nice i like how you put this poem.. Its very strong i like the words and the set up that you have used.. thank you so much for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2008 12:50:00 PM)

    Sania - there's a very prominent streak of true emotion here, a red thread of pain and grief...beautiful write! Thanks for sharing.10 from me. Keep it up,
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  • (11/15/2008 6:31:00 PM)

    Sania, this is very good. Very good indeed. You have a real instinct for writing poetry and you can't 'learn' that - you're born with it, I believe. Of course your theme is very strong and emotionally compelling, but you have shaped your stanzas with style and just the right amount of repetition and rhyme. I wonder if your title is too obvious, though? 'Daddy's Darling' would say it all and the understated is often much more powerful than the obvious. Just a thought. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2008 12:30:00 AM)

    Fantastic! It's really great. How touching..full of emotions..grief or anger I may never know for I feel mixed emotions! You have made your readers think and cry late at night for this poem! A great piece! (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (11/8/2008 8:30:00 AM)

    very touchy....! ......penned beautifully!
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  • (11/8/2008 6:27:00 AM)

    really touching and innocent poem
    good rhymes
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  • (11/7/2008 7:52:00 PM)

    hey i know how u feel i lost my mom too it's hard at first, but then you find a way out of it because any kid could do any change they want. I done it so you could do one too. You just need a bite of time. (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2008 8:52:00 AM)

    Spelling of drops need to be corrected, the whole written with enough rhymes, the facts shown clear about the diary life....not like imagination, it is a fact.Thank you for sharing this a good piece. (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2008 11:07:00 AM)

    How can someone so young sing words so sad.. You have talent young girl..10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 5, 2008