You said you shall stay
The next moment you are gone
You tell me not to fray
And I wait till every dawn
Then it clicks me that you left me
Like a fool I sit and cry
I get down on my knee
And wish I would just die
I take whatever comes in my way
And fling it across the room
I get pleasure when it breaks
‘Coz I am broken and others should too
I stand in a corner and hit my head
My strength might break the wall
My bloods all gone and I feel so dead
I look up and scream “why? ”
Poems I pen and I write and I write
But nothing heals this freaking pain
I close all the curtains and sit in the dark
And smile as my pain slowly drains
smiling out the pain...yes...that is the best way to heal a wound...especially a love wound...words beautifully expressive, Sania...nice write...10
ahh Sania much poignant write.....such a painful lines, made me freezed for a sec.........te way yu ended the last line s awesome....lines with feelings straight from the heart.....10+++ sebastine
lines penned with mixed emotions...........a complete combination of love, care mixed with depart n tears...........10+++ sebastine
strong words for a strong poem. powerful and beautiful...10!
reading your poem down and enjoying, happy when it ended in a smile. very good
I like this poem, it reminds me my teenage. Very hard reaction and successful slow down.
This is so strong a poem. I hope you don't really hit your head. Get pillows and get the pain and anger out this way. Excellent work! Karin Anderson
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I would like to translate this poem
Good strong write Sania...well done...thank you