TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

**i Welcome Your Stab *********...

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 22, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, November 19, 2009

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Comments about **i Welcome Your Stab *********... by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

  • Mackenzie Keane (3/4/2010 4:21:00 PM)

    i'm hoping this is a joke or SOMETHING. being the first of your poems i have read i am disappointed to say the least.
    dots.
    GOOD one.

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  • Iron Panda 23™ (2/25/2010 10:35:00 AM)

    i likes this....its silent yet expressive.....peaceful and at the same time full of meaning :)

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  • Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (12/5/2009 1:08:00 PM)

    Subsubtle and written in white ink on white paper…...
    dr.sakti

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  • Rafique Farooqi (11/8/2009 12:20:00 PM)

    it is just more than a brave topic from you

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  • ***chocolate ***candy*** (10/29/2009 11:28:00 AM)

    this one is new way to express a emotion
    but I dont welcome any stab
    regardless it is deserving 10

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/3/2009 1:31:00 PM)

    To be read in the pixels dots.
    More dots = better clarity. Here it is.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. and so on
    Nice ten
    Ms. Nivedita.
    UK
    Thanks for kind comments on my poems and educative too.
    Please read my poems with same educative comments as I’m a nascent one
    niv

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (8/26/2009 2:07:00 PM)

    so here my beautiful post showed me how many play in my back yard of course those one whom rated me 2 or one and it seems some one God bless him rated me three..those are not from who commented to me, those are hidden hands..wishing that wise people understand why i did saw, , do you see now..smart enough and you will discover what is going on...regards...

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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (8/25/2009 7:24:00 AM)

    a poetic silence........a dialogue with eternity.
    CP

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  • syaz wafea (8/25/2009 5:05:00 AM)

    wow! ! this is new! ! amazing! ! hahahaha

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  • Lady Grace (8/25/2009 3:03:00 AM)

    where are the words? ..are they edited? ..ooouuuchhhhh...my gosh...whew...its so hard to interpret this in telecommunications.......dot...dot...dot..dot...10 4
    .......nice dear tamara...hhhhmmmmm...lav this....ur so lucky today coz my naughtiness has been controlled, , , waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.......

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  • Catrina Heart (8/25/2009 1:15:00 AM)

    From Charles B. blank page to my human being series of point and symbols here you come from a continous periods.............Thanks for this welcoming stab! ! !

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  • Ying Escalona (8/24/2009 10:59:00 PM)

    nice work Tamara...you never told me you know the Braille system :)
    but..please parry the stab....don't be hit...do some Aikido :)

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  • 3wwad 52 (8/24/2009 2:57:00 PM)

    NEW STYLE... NOT A USED STYLE

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  • Steven S (8/24/2009 1:52:00 PM)

    Maybe because I know of someone who longs to be stabbed (by me) , that I can understand this sentiment. It might seem strange to someone who has never longed to be so stabbed.

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  • Raj ArumugamRaj Arumugam (8/24/2009 5:55:00 AM)

    Interesting experimental piece, Tamara

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  • James MclainJames Mclain (8/22/2009 6:53:00 PM)

    Only gold barley..
    long with the wind..
    and as millions...
    of long spears...
    offering up there...
    the tops to the moon..
    at night..
    like hair did they..iip

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