neillg everton

I Will Miss You

I will miss you, more than miss you when I die,
And lost will be the light of many Suns.
Silently, like you, I'll wait and cry.
Until the day we are together once more comes.

Until that day I'll be with you alone,
As every absent day, begins its start.
Be sure that when you cry I cry with you,
Our mirrored pain so heavy in our hearts.

I'll smile when you smile too,
On days that don't seem quite as bad,
When faint memories return, of the special love we had.
And if only for a second, the Sun returns again
I'll be with you in the sunshine of the memories that remain.

In my heart and yours one truth, forever true,
As we share our thoughts with watchful stars above,
You are part me, as I am part of you,
And there is nothing, nothing deeper than our love.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 2, 2014

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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (12/14/2019 12:04:00 PM)

    Such a nice poem, Neillg. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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  • James GaskinJames Gaskin (7/3/2016 10:38:00 AM)

    Beautiful, very moving!

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (11/13/2015 2:20:00 PM)

    You are part me, as I am part of you,
    And there is nothing, nothing deeper than our love. very nice and touching poem. very romantic poem. thank you

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  • Kelly KurtKelly Kurt (8/27/2015 4:51:00 PM)

    A touching poem, Neillg. Thanks for sharing
    Peace

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (11/8/2014 8:58:00 AM)

    A lovely romantic poem well articulated and subtly penned to capture, the happiness and bliss of love felt in the inner recesses of the heart. Very nice indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (8/3/2014 1:54:00 AM)

    Lovely piece. When my husband passed on I was very worried he'd forget me.

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  • Valerie DohrenValerie Dohren (8/2/2014 1:38:00 PM)

    Quite beautiful Neil, and very poignant. Loss from the perspective of the one who has passed away - very insightful, like it very much. Very well written.

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  • Gajanan MishraGajanan Mishra (8/2/2014 7:09:00 AM)

    thoughts with watchful stars, good writing, thanks.

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