I Will Not Let You Alone Comments

Very poignant! Nicely penned.Great! Thanks for sharing.

parents can get so caught up in providing material things that they forget the most important nourishment for a child is affection. that is the best way to feel loved. great poem, I could feel the emotion in it too.

Great write. The home has suffered due engagement outside. This undoubtedly is a societal bane. I enjoy the poem. Thank you.

A very good idea that has been nicely penned. We have a tendency to blame each other for having no time to spare but if we looked at the issue closely, we can see that we are the only destroyers of peace and harmony. The concluding lines are noteworthy. If we cared our kith and kin, they will return the same in our later life. Very thoughtful. Love and laugh - laughter' could be a better word. Bore - I think it is actually 'bear. Thank you.

'The shadow of ghost, hug each other, sway and gay.' This is good, had fun reading & rereading :) ...I like the interchange between the different voices...now you can leave me alone :) :) ...tks u for ur comment.

Very well written your poem is astonishing! I really like it keep up the good work!

A well written lovely poem. Have a look at my poem Our World its also about children.

Enjoyed this read Aftab- you have talent. It is so descriptive of childhood emotions and how to keep them alive.

Very very heart touching Aftab Alamji, congratulations.