I Wish Poem by cute little princess Anusshkaa

I Wish

Rating: 5.0


I WISH

i could fly like a bird
i could set like the curd

i could roar like a tiger
i could aim like a viper

i could sail like a boat
i could shine like a note

i could rain like the clouds
i could shout like the crowds

i could sprakle like the stars
i could trample all the wars

i could strike like a hammer
i could polish all my grammar

i could sing like the bee
i could be what i want to be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhaswat Chakraborty 07 August 2009

You know what Anushka, I still wish i could strike like a hammer i could polish my grammar Beautiful composition. ...10..

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Aron Lelei 06 August 2009

Just wishes and wishes. I have a lot too but to name a few, to be me and help encourage others to rise above the clouds. Thanks for your wishes and keep up wishing for you are a wishy poet that I have written as my poem but not yet in my site. I will put it there soon and will dedicate it to you.Keep it coming the sweet one.

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Uriah Hamilton 05 August 2009

Very lovely, hope all your wishes come true.

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Indira Renganathan 05 August 2009

Nice flow of words....you could be whater you want to be...God bless

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Adi Cox 05 August 2009

I like the way this poem is set out and I like the idea of wanting to set like a curd. keep writing Anusshkaa. You have a flair for writing, well done.10/10.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 29 August 2009

A matured poem for the age and may be for that reason you are cute princess Anusshkaa. The rhyming and the contents are sparkling. Very good verse. Liked it so much.

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Ernestina Benedicto 11 August 2009

This was a beautiful poem a lot of meaning went into this... I WISH u good luck!

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Sohini Pal (13yrs) 09 August 2009

verrrry cute poem....loved the lines i could strike like a hammer i could polish my grammar... :)

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Richard Post 07 August 2009

One day you gon be what u wanna bee

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Emma Adamyan 07 August 2009

well, not too bad for ur age :) i mean its lovely, dear. but most of all i liked about polishing ur grammar. i wish i could too, byeeeee

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