I Wish Poem by cute little princess Anusshkaa

I Wish

Rating: 5.0


I WISH

i could fly like a bird
i could set like the curd

i could roar like a tiger
i could aim like a viper

i could sail like a boat
i could shine like a note

i could rain like the clouds
i could shout like the crowds

i could sprakle like the stars
i could trample all the wars

i could strike like a hammer
i could polish all my grammar

i could sing like the bee
i could be what i want to be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Identification Accepted 04 August 2009

short sweet and simple i loved it ^^

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Meggie Gultiano 05 August 2009

this is simply beautiful, sweetie. I love it.May all your wish will come true

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Aijaz Asif 05 August 2009

yes you could...it's easy, all you have to do is to try....simple and nice write...keep it up and thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif

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Mubeen Sadhika 05 August 2009

Your poem is also so cute. Loved it baby.

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*~*happily desturbed*~* ? 05 August 2009

this is so cute. keep it up.10

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 29 August 2009

A matured poem for the age and may be for that reason you are cute princess Anusshkaa. The rhyming and the contents are sparkling. Very good verse. Liked it so much.

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Ernestina Benedicto 11 August 2009

This was a beautiful poem a lot of meaning went into this... I WISH u good luck!

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Sohini Pal (13yrs) 09 August 2009

verrrry cute poem....loved the lines i could strike like a hammer i could polish my grammar... :)

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Richard Post 07 August 2009

One day you gon be what u wanna bee

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Emma Adamyan 07 August 2009

well, not too bad for ur age :) i mean its lovely, dear. but most of all i liked about polishing ur grammar. i wish i could too, byeeeee

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