I Won'T Give Up Anymore, This Is My Dream And I Adore Poem by Abdallah Gamal
I Won'T Give Up Anymore, This Is My Dream And I Adore
I come today to say to this life that I'm not afraid.
I don't even care anymore about what you made.
Everything has its end, but the smile won't fade.
Everything has its price, and so I have paid.
You think that you are strong enough to catch me in a cage,
But sorry about your guesses, I just have opened a new page,
where the pencil is in my hand, and the eraser is beside me,
and the dream is mine, so you don't know what it gonna be.
So catch your breath, and take all your precautions,
because in my world there are no any anticipations.
A really good poem, with a great flow to it. May i invite you to read my poem called, Boy to a man.
i like the change in the rhyme scheme, it helps the poem flow nicely. well done.
really wonderful poem full of hope and stronge starting wothout any fair, well done +10.
A lovely poem, reminds me of the last two lines of the poem INVICTUS: I AM THE MASTER OF MY FATE, THE CAPTAIN OF MY SOUL. Beautiful indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.
This poem is a shiny sparkling poem, and I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it.
wow, i can really tell that this came from the heart. i am literally bussing with hope right now! !
Very well written (: I love your style! The topic is just amazing, I can tell it's meaningful and special to you but other people can also relate. I also absolutely love the rhyme and the rhythm of it. The ability to write the way you do is truly a gift, my friend. Keep it up (: ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2025 7:26:51 PM # 1.0.0
Well written and, a beautiful poem