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~i Wonder If You Love Me~

Why is it that you stay here?
Do you wish that you were free?
I wonder...
if I offered you your freedom
would you walk away from me?

Do you stay because you want to
or do you feel you should?
I wonder...
if we didn't have the kids
would we get along so good?

How can I know you love me
when I can't see how you feel?
I wonder...
if I could read your mind
would you try to cut some deals?

I hope this is forever.
I've bet on it with my life.
I wonder...
if you could choose again
would I still be your wife?
Mary Nagy
Wednesday, June 21, 2006
Ernestine Northover 22 June 2006
I don't think you need to wonder Mary not with that lovely man you've got there. Lovely poem, I like ' I wonder' as a centre to the verses. Love Ernestine XXX
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Joseph Daly 22 June 2006
A lovely expression of self doubt. The question is always about how we feel rather than how others feel about us. In this sense the theme is a perfect one because as creators we use our work as a relationship between us and our audience. Nicel done Mary.
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How could anybody not? Perhaps, just perhaps, if such questions do not arise to oneself, tis a sign that the intensity of love is dimming. A lovely and loving, bittersweet, truthful piece.
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Scarlett Treat 21 June 2006
I doubt there is a married person in the whole wide world who hasn't felt this same way, wondering, wondering - Sad, sort of lonely, wanting to know and afraid to ask Good work, Mary.
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billy bob 21 June 2006
I wonder... if you could choose again would I still be your wife? i believe that was my favorite part to this poem.. i agree VERY well constructed.... i blieve that many ppl could relate 2 this.. ppl who dont necessarily have husbands.. or dont have wives.. ppl in a relationship.. and i mean a serious relationship.. could relate 2 it.. ppl who say i love u 2 that special sm1.. here it bak.. and they both really meant it.. could relate to 2 it... : -) .. i liked: -) .. it was nice.. *dont stop writing*: -) -debbie: -)
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Charles M Moore 21 June 2006
Well constructed and to the point, So many questions.
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