I Work With Retarded Fish When I Am Not Catching People Watching Me Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

I Work With Retarded Fish When I Am Not Catching People Watching Me

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Hunger is fasting always eating bubbles asking
for a people stick on which to chew.
Leaking tears of spice to mellow tast of you.
Sitting on a bay of sunken docks sniffing reused
questions fixing clocks flakes of mind floating by
a big deluge.
Baby fish in fluid takes no druid stones where
crazy people seem to lay angle fish swimming
close to shore hooked up with you.
Even a retarded fish can bend the rule floating
in a sea bent ruler way to fat to throw you back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

yes... .... but...... Is It Poetry if it is Work? I poke the stick when I am not chewing it... AND I like the bubbles very much in this one... ...

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Patti Masterman 02 February 2009

I like your style of writing very much.

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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