I Write In Dreams Poem by Aria Siren

I Write In Dreams

Rating: 4.3


I am a dream
I walk in the billows
I dance in the exhalations
I swim in the clouds
I love without consequence
I curl within hearts
I laugh upon wakes
I kiss all the possibilities
I dare danger
I twirl in gauzy light
I tease eyelids fluttering
I arch my back
I stretch my legs
I whisper to you in daylight
I own you in rest
I am an artist
I paint in thoughts
I am a poet
I write in dreams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alexander Coppedge 19 February 2013

Your art has great taste and appeal Still to fine tune the pice it needs work

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Gajanan Mishra 19 February 2013

I am a poet I write in dreams. Thanks. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Babatunde Aremu 19 February 2013

Nice poem. I think the poem writes reality in imaginative form. Gtreat write

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Yuliy Valenko 19 February 2013

Very beautiful, but I agree with Alexander.. And I want to add that it does not flow, maybe a little bit shorter? I give an 8 anyway! God bless!

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Wulan Permata Puri 27 February 2013

Keep dreaming! Keep writing! I'll look foward, and i agree with Alexander

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Exquisite metaphors and captivating rhyme and rhythm

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Kieran J96 21 March 2013

I'm not sure how to describe this, it shows how a poet can capture and create dreams, the words can evoke dreams in those that read/her them- that's my interpretation anyway, nice poem :)

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Titi Dale 16 March 2013

Nice :) I'm a fan! What I like about this poem is the way it flows, without even needing rhyme. Great job!

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Titi Dale 16 March 2013

Nice :) I'm a fan! What I like about this poem is the way it flows, without even needing rhyme. Great job!

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Aldrich Suarez 05 March 2013

...................................A wonderful dream.. :)

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