Ice Tears Poem by Asif Baloch
Ice Tears
Please do come sometimes
to this way
fill me with lovely words
and hold my castle
made of clay
dropp some rubies and
diamonds
touch my soul with
whispering wisps
gather the rusted gold
of my broken life
pick the pieces of my
shatered desires
wipe the tears off my
barren eyes
write the stories to
make me smile
sing the song of
love and hope
persue me to keep
grip on silky rope
Please, please
please
please do come sometimes
in my dreams
put your hand and
hush these screams
here see
I'm begging
and
on my knees
I have cried
all my life
cried with tears
which turned into ice
hey asif dont u worry ice tears will soon become warm ones nice write ++++++10 anju
Asif This poem has passionate imagery and an excellent flow to it. I love the literation e.g. whispering whisps and lines such as 'gather the rusted gold of my broken life'. Such a plea surely can not be ignored. Excellent! Karin Anderson
'Ice Tears', winter words indeed, You create very memorable moods. Your work has my applause. Kind regards, Sandra
Wow Asif Bhai... It's indeed a lovely write... Soo passionate and directly pierces the heart... Thanks for sharing...10 +++++
Beggar of love is always a great lover.Great writes Asif.
Im so moved by your poems asif.. I get goos bumps when i read them.. you write them so well.....and i really felt the poem, know what i mean? anyways..keep up ur hard n gud work
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 5:18:33 PM # 1.0.0.1119
hot tears shed for love turning into unnoticed cold ice...good write, Aijaz...emotional expressive...10