Here on the surface of the sun
Its hard to remember what you were concerned over
Ten thousand degrees or more
Inside hosts of hot-house cooks abound
To stay cool you have to move about
Stroll around some, maybe
Over by the magnetic flux zone
Note to self: Pickup some nice shades at the drugstore
Well I love the obscurity - so many meanings possible. Good poem, Steve
this one here is on my list of things i like but i dont know why
This has a very individual style Tailor Thankyou Love duncan X
Thought-provoking AND scientifically accurate (re sunspots being cooler) ! Nicely done! -chuck
The intensity of fire and ice - an impressive surrealist piece of whimsy with a down to earth coda. Love this. Allie xxxx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I believe this is again in the abstract zone--I like it---Melvina