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Ice Water

Rating: 4.9
Here on the surface of the sun
Its hard to remember what you were concerned over
Ten thousand degrees or more
Inside hosts of hot-house cooks abound
To stay cool you have to move about
Stroll around some, maybe
Over by the magnetic flux zone
Note to self: Pickup some nice shades at the drugstore
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Heather Wilkins 24 September 2013
a good write Enjoyed
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Heather Wilkins 24 September 2013
a good write Enjoyed
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Chuck Audette 12 June 2009
Thought-provoking AND scientifically accurate (re sunspots being cooler) ! Nicely done! -chuck
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Risha : Ahmed 18 July 2007
This poem also has that distinct flavour. A unique idea.
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Alison Cassidy 29 June 2007
The intensity of fire and ice - an impressive surrealist piece of whimsy with a down to earth coda. Love this. Allie xxxx
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Melvina Germain 18 March 2007
I love the title Tailor, one would think of ice water. Excellent poem, I like it very much.---Melvina---
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Lola Cunningham 16 March 2007
Tailor, indeed, you have painted a truly beautiful poem here.
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John Tiong Chunghoo 06 October 2006
i prefer the south pole. good one tailor.
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Will Barber 28 September 2006
Excellent, and very wry humor. Fire and ice water - loved it. - Will
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 September 2006
A WEE TASTE OF TH' CONTEMPORARY ABSTRACT, Mr. Bell! I LIKE IT A LOT...CLEVER & IMAGINEATIVE INDEED....FJR
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