Saturday, March 22, 2008

Ideas, Ideals And Delusions Comments

Rating: 4.9

I have some notions of nothingness
I have some ideals of illusions
Into the abyss then with these thoughts
My ideas, ideals and delusions.
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Rani Turton
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Theresa Moore 20 May 2008

I like this poem because it gives hope for the future. In spite of nagging reminders from the past that are troublesome. Somehow a person finds a way to go on...with the emphasis on ideals. Well done.

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Delilah Miller 04 May 2008

Silly idealist comments that just give patronizing advice. It's literature! It's a wonderful poem and I loved the hopeful ending and the image of starry night. It evoked the same feelings I get when I look at Van Gogh's famous painting. Looking forward to reading more of your work! X's and O's

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Ivor Hogg 12 April 2008

Without a dream you have nothing

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Raj Nandy 06 April 2008

RANI, this is a good one, - 10! RAJ NANDY, NEW DELHI,07 APR 08

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Roland Bastien 06 April 2008

je ne sais pas...perhaps a certain notion of nothingness can reshape the meaning of time - planck time and illusion...maybe i am wrong-they based on a binary logic

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Broken Peaces 28 March 2008

Ideas and ideals are what we strive for in life and can cnstrude to visions of what we hope to achieve, illusions often take us down the path to nowhere, your pen is powerful and thought provoking thankyou Rani 10 Chris

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 27 March 2008

Ideals are never illusions but sometime life forces us feel so...excellent write with deep imagery.....

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Flora Gillingham 24 March 2008

Like it very much. Hang on to your idas and ideals, and even to your delusions. F

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Abha Sharma 24 March 2008

if we take dreams, illusions, hopes then we would be poor shrunken things, to survive they play significant role..well said..

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 March 2008

this whole big things.....living is an illussions..............it will vanished when we're no longer here.............

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