Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 4,814 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

If Animals Could Talk - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

If all the animals in
the world could talk
what would they say
what would they think

Would they tell us
about our mistakes
or would they think
it's too late

Would they start
a charity to get us
back on our feet

Would they start
a new world with
Peace and no poverty
What would they do

Comments about If Animals Could Talk by Dave Alan Walker

  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (5/31/2012 8:57:00 AM)

    It is interesting to watch the animals. They are the real long-suffering creations. I wonder if they judge us or it is just a human trade? (Report) Reply

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  • (5/29/2012 7:14:00 PM)

    I'm sure they would take pleasure at the opportunity to tell us about all of our mistakes.10 (Report) Reply

  • (5/27/2012 12:39:00 PM)

    if they could talk (and they do!) , and we could listen... sadly we often dont! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (5/27/2012 9:04:00 AM)

    Very nice write! I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (5/27/2012 2:47:00 AM)

    I Like this, I think some of the big ones might tell us we are breakfast, The ones we have helped would be sure to help us, I`m laughing at the thought of them running a charity shop for us, but then, , who knows, it could happen - lol ,
    What a great thought that they could start a new peaceful world.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 27, 2012

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