Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

If Devotion Is Expected - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

She wanted to appear to others,
She had it together.
And was in complete and total control.

And he has stated,
Under one roof shared by two...
If communication wasn't done,
A key would be left...
And he would be through.

Both wish to have a relationship,
Shared with a caring done by another.
But someone has to agree,
Trying to impress others...
To prove one to be independent,
Is not good to establish a relationship...
If devotion is expected to flow with honesty.


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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 24, 2011


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