Mariana Zita

Rookie (September 30 / Guatemala)

If I - Poem by Mariana Zita

If I die tonight
will you cry

If I am lost will
you look for me

If I am alone will
you be there

If I get sick will
you heal me

If I get angry will
you calm me down

If I get scared will
you ease my fears

If I shatter to pieces
will you be there to
collect the pieces

If something ever
happens to me will
you be there


Comments about If I by Mariana Zita

  • (1/15/2009 2:37:00 AM)

    This is beautiful - short and sweet, but sad also.
    God is there, and he loves you.
    Great concepts, don't stop writing!
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  • (9/25/2008 7:09:00 PM)

    Ha, use so many questions in testing us...
    good imagination during you are typing this..10.
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  • (9/10/2007 4:26:00 PM)

    Someone will always be there. This is a poem of mine that is like the answer to this poem of yours. If I is an amazing poem, it just highlights all the fears people have that no-one will notice, or care. Well done x (Report)Reply

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  • (7/4/2007 5:53:00 AM)

    i hope they will be there. well done. x (Report)Reply

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  • (6/15/2007 11:00:00 PM)

    WOW..that was great! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (5/6/2007 2:09:00 PM)

    You really said it all.
    The security we all want.
    Keep it up :)
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  • (5/4/2007 2:40:00 PM)

    This poem is beautiful and eloquent! Also, great economy of words, yet, still a full-hearted poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/22/2007 1:57:00 PM)

    I like the way you write your poems; short and concise, but you still manage to convey complex messages. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/18/2007 10:37:00 AM)

    I love your poems, Mariana. This one is so moving. Who knows if the one you want to be there by your side will finally be there? Usually, the ones you want to be there for you, don't care to do so; sometimes they don't even know you exist. Hopefully you'll have better luck than me in your life.

    Take care,
    CeCe
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  • (4/3/2007 11:11:00 PM)

    i will be there for u mariana

    all the best
    roger
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  • (3/24/2007 1:08:00 PM)

    nice inner urge for security is great in every body. nice. take care (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 2, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 26, 2011


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