Mariana Zita

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She Stands Alone - Poem by Mariana Zita

She stands alone
with no one by her
side

In the middle of the
crowd she stands
while everybody bruises
her with their words

As the tears stream
down her face she
stands alone with no
one by her side

No one see's the bruises
they inflict upon her but they
are there none the less

So until someone stands up
for her she will always be left
out and made fun of


Comments about She Stands Alone by Mariana Zita

  • (9/3/2007 6:15:00 PM)

    Awww, I just got a tear in my eye. This is outstanding. I feel his way too somtimes. But your not alone, I hope your not... You have your mom who loves you very much I read it in your poem. This is very deep! Sad but great! !

    -meghan
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  • (6/15/2007 11:12:00 PM)

    thts so deep plz tell me thats dosen't happen to u. great poem (Report)Reply

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  • (6/10/2007 5:21:00 PM)

    **Cry, Chirp! **
    Very touching!
    Lilly
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  • (5/10/2007 11:09:00 PM)

    Deep. Very good. I like how you use free verse, while a lot of other ppl on here tend to rhyme, no matter how it sounds (no offense to anyone who does this: -D) (Report)Reply

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  • (5/5/2007 12:07:00 PM)

    this's so well written, i love it :)
    warmest regards,
    emotional girl
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  • (4/3/2007 10:14:00 PM)

    lovely poemo indeed.

    amazin
    Roger
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  • (4/3/2007 3:22:00 PM)

    hey its megan!
    i love this poems its so inspiring
    i hope everyone who reads this is inspired to standup
    not just for themselves but for thoose around them
    great poem! ! !
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  • (3/29/2007 8:47:00 PM)

    i really really like this poem i; ve been there, and i wish someone would have known to stand up. Great poem its so true (Report)Reply

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  • (3/13/2007 10:26:00 AM)

    Yes, Mariana, it's so important that we stand up for others and that we observe who needs our help against those who keep bruising their soul - and it's important that we find those who help us when we are in need of a friend. Your poem expresses this well.

    Magda
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  • (3/1/2007 7:29:00 PM)

    You did a wonderful job writing this poem (Report)Reply

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  • (3/1/2007 6:58:00 PM)

    good job its a great poem i like it a lot (Report)Reply

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  • (3/1/2007 6:51:00 PM)

    nicely put & said, I like it (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 1, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 25, 2011


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