If I could change what I did, I could
Undo mistakes that once seemed good
Regretful thoughts fill up my mind
As I long for a chance to rewind
Every action has a consequence
Some that bring joy, others that cause offense
The road I took seemed right at the time
But now I wish I could press rewind
There are moments that haunt my soul
Moments where I lost control
Things I wish I could take back
But time relentlessly marches forward, never slack
Oh, how I wish I could change
The choices I made, the paths I took, so strange
But alas, it's all in the past
And I'm left with memories that last
Yet, I must remember to forgive
And allow myself to live
Learning from my mistakes and moving on
For that's where true growth is born
So, though I can't undo the past
I'll hold my head high and make it last
Learning from my mistakes and becoming anew
For that's all I can do.
4 1/2, make it 5 (five) stars. I found you in list of 'new poets' here. Welcome. : ) bri
BUT, this one I've still saved so I'll resend it: 'last stanza: 'make it last' means? KEEP your head held high? I think so. AND 'anew'? 'anew / (əˈnjuː) / adverb over again; once more in a different way'
I THINK some of my comments already were sent, one about the use of 'slack'. PH made me sign in again, so I'm not sure. : (
By 'slack' I believe you mean 'cessation in movement or flow'. So, time never stops advancing. Sometimes people don't 'take enough time' to make the 'right' decision. ; (
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Best poem I've ever read .wow...please keep posting relatable poems.