If I Could Play A Flute Like Krishna Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

If I Could Play A Flute Like Krishna

Rating: 4.0


Baby if I could play a flute like Krishna
You would be attracted by my charisma!

Baby you are my thought’s mania
It seems you are my utopia!

Baby you are my love’s sweetest goal
You can make me a diamond from coal!

Baby you are my hope to survive
Your negligence can burn me alive!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacqui Broad 19 October 2011

If you write this beautiful, I can only imagine what your music would sound like...

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Michael Takhellambam 16 October 2011

Great piece! ! I'm fond of reading lines with rhythms..

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Dave Walker 16 October 2011

Really like this, the flow is so so good. Great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, unwritten soul.

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Louis Cecile 16 October 2011

A very musical like start to this piece, which changes tone quickly however it feels like there is more to indulge the reader.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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