If I Should Stop Trying Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

If I Should Stop Trying

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If I should stop trying...
The value of my sweat and tears
Would diminished
And you wouldn't have a clue
How priceless
This gift of myself I give!
If I should stop trying...
To be better at what I do.
Not only for me,
But also for you too!
I want you to stay proud.
That's why I will not allow you to find me...
Hiding in self doubt,
Shaded by my own shadow!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Krishna Dasani 19 October 2006

lovely.. no donr ever stop trying.. depair can jus be a phase.. if you give up, when that phase ends, you will probably regret giving up! ! lovely thought expressed in a simple way! ! or mayb the other way round! ! smiles, krishna

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