If I Were A Bird Comments

Beautiful composition, very romantic!

Beautiful poem. I captured the beauty here though your original Hindi/Urdu. Thank you.

dear aftab bhai salam glad to read your review of my poem, and to read your poem. thanx. now, the one ousted in my poem, the outcast is Satan, not Adam asws. please read again. InshaAllah, the wise prophet of us, our great grandfather, Adam Alayhi salatuwassalam remained blessed. salam to HIm too. rgds. taj shah

If I were a bird, very good write, thanks.

If I were a bird, very good write, thanks.

beautifully crafted. a very matured expression of love. subhanallah!

Intensive love drizzle here.

U.S is absolutely right.A gem it is! Fantastic.

So beautiful, lovely and pleasing! ....truly liked it! _Soul