If Mind A Dancer Is On Stage Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

If Mind A Dancer Is On Stage



I see my mind as I see vast seaside,
And thoughts like random waves fading away,
They rise, recede like waxing-waning tide,
Yet some, like weeds survive their welcome stay.

Oft, like an empty stage flooded with light,
Amidst it all, there survives pure silence,
Like a rain-washed shore in deep penitence,
The dancer left, leaving delight filled blight!

But left lone on rain-washed shore in silence,
If mind a dancer is upon life stage,
And I but a witness, a silent sage,
If so, what use this idle contrite sense?

And if body-mind be vehicle in use,
What use being in command without cues?
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The poet's pen wonders here: if mind is like a dancer on life's stage, and the real I (atman)is merely a witness, it is akin to a situation wherein He's commanding the reins without cues.
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Musings | 04.01.11 |

Wednesday, December 19, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: dance,mind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 20 March 2019

After reading this philosophic poem, I thought of zero and absolute zero (of temperature) , we can reach very close to absolute zero but we can not arrive at it as on -273 degrees centigrade volume will become zero. Atma wuh shoonya hay jo hamare pas hay, paramatma ke bahut nikat hum pahonch sakte hayN lekin agar hum pahunch gaye to phir hamara astityvya shesh nahIN rahe ga, hamari atma paramatma ban jaye gi, shayed yehi niwan ya mokch hay.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 March 2019

What amazingly beautiful comments! - the concept of absolute zero is very apt, Unless man loses his existence and becomes zero, ah it is akin to saying his ego evaporates completely. But then this can happen only when we die. Thank you so much.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 March 2019

The vast seaside! ! ! Able to cast your free mind on the issues of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 March 2019

I appreciate your valuable feedback, thanks Edward Louis.

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