If You Go Poem by Sandra Feldman

If You Go

Rating: 5.0


If you go,
My whole life will shrivel up, I'll start to cry,
I'll become the cold Wind, shrinking to a sigh,
I will fold up like a handkerchief's goodbye
If you go, if you leave me, I'll just Die.

If you go,
Who will share my simple verse?
Who will travel thru my Universe?
Who will calm my everlasting thirst?
Who will heal my dreams and my tears, dry?
If you go.

Sunday, March 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 16 March 2014

No-ones going anywhere Sandra, we shall stay to read your many inspired lines. This comes across as a passionate and heartfelt plea. Very well penned.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 March 2014

A poem of intense emotion, a pleasure to read and feel. Moved by the poignancy, the emotional intensity. 10/10 for sure!

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