I'll Be Waiting For You In Sweden Poem by Maria Mitea

I'll Be Waiting For You In Sweden

Rating: 5.0


i will not blind you,
and I will not strike you with my brightness,
if you want to find me
you will always find me in the same place, on its axis
motionless,
endearing statue admiring the cute pigeons kissing,
i will not run after the sun,
i will not run after other stars, or
after the moon
for
i'm not made to walk from place to place,
not when the sun ribut not even at sunset,
if you want, in a day
or a century
you'll find me still,
for
the sky is moving for me,
you will always find me in the same place,
saguaro flower surrounded by stars,
and
if you want to see me
without the horizon or the height of the celestial heaven staying our way
you could move to sweden,
i will not blind you,
and i won't hit you like thunder,
and, if you want, even it might take several years
i could clone myself as the southern cross,
or
in the little cloud of magellan,
and if you want to be the big cloud, there are proven advantages that in their strangeness they are poorer in metals than the milky way,
but,
better, though, i'd say, it is more practical to wait for you in sweden


#polaris

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 01 June 2022

What a beautiful romantic poem! Such splendid imagery! Very well crafted, Maria!

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Maria Mitea 01 June 2022

Thank you, Richard! Your com. is very much appreciated&motivating!

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A great romantic writing. Very impressive images. Loved it. Top score, Maria

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Rob Lamberton 02 November 2022

Such confidence combined with a giving spirit!

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Loved the lucid flow of poem accompanied by elegant words......10 Lovely

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you will always find me in the same place, may be in Sweden.....beautifully written Maria

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Anjandev Roy 02 June 2022

Marvelous piece....thanks for sharing...

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Maria Mitea 02 June 2022

Much appreciated your words of support&encouragement, A! Blessings!

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Anjandev Roy 02 June 2022

Marvelous...

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Maria Mitea 02 June 2022

Thank you, Anjandev!

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