it is a shadow
of the tree
dark lighting
at the zenith of the day, tasting
the sweat on man's forehead
the child of the sun
it is a shadow
of grass
opaque existence
angle of light
in the calmness of the earth
the child of the sun
it is a shadow, silently
following the man
to the water spring
in the valley of springs,
the mother sun
quenches its thirst
with the tears of the earth,
the child of the sun
it is a shadow
Congratulations, Ms Mitea. Today this marvellous poem is selected Poem Of The Day-Members. This wonderful poem deserves the recognition, sure. And it gave me an occasion for a revisit. Thank you, ph
Thank you deeply, Unnikrishnan! All my gratitude to you stoping by, and reading, writing back!
"" the child of the sun it is a shadow""! What a novel idea. Loved the poem. Please do write more and share. Full score and onto my fav
No matter what, I like your verses very much, dear MM. God's Blessins! 5 Stars! Keep on writing, your words are poetic
the mother sun quenches its thirst with the tears of the earth, ........nice conceptualization. A beautiful poem is well executed.
Uniquely beautiful imagery that's imprinted on the mind. Heartiest Of Congratulations On The Honour Of Receiving POD, Maria. Very well deserved!
Nice thought. Nice concept. Nice imagery, Maria. The sun giveth; The shadow taketh away. Congrats to have been chosen as todays member poet
Congrats dear poetess Maria for this highly philosophical poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An interesting concept both introspective and imaginative beautifully articulated in your poem.