Image Poem by Tan Pratonix

Image

Rating: 3.8


No flowery fantasy can face
[Its ephemeral beauty crumbles to touch]
The green translucency of grapes
In the solid whiteness of a cup.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tan Pratonix 09 February 2006

I agree. A better poem is 'Still Life' by my friend, Tom Prato. You should check that out.

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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

I like it, but I find it a little clumsy to read out loud.

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