If I Were A Woofy Dog Poem by Tan Pratonix

If I Were A Woofy Dog

Rating: 5.0


If I were a Woofy Dog
With a waggy tail,
Then I would learn to catch a frog
And ride upon a whale.

I'd have a lovely, juicy bone,
Full of mincy meat,
And I would eat it all alone
Under the garden seat.

I wouldn't have to toe the heel
Or learn some silly tricks,
I wouldn't have a scrappy meal,
I wouldn't pick up sticks.

The Poppil Sparrow we would hunt,
Tinker Pup and I,
And we would catch the Gooby Grunt,
The wild boar with one eye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 07 February 2006

Tan - reads like something out of Winnie the Pooh - cute little poem, with a catchy rhythm - I like this one very much.....................Linda

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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

Absolutely delightful. Another one I can send to my young grandchildren.

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Sandra Fowler 08 February 2006

Charming piece. I lost my woofy dog not long ago. I miss him every time I sit down to write a poem. I felt as if I rated 'ten' with him every time. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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Cj Heck 09 February 2006

Absolutely adorable, Tan. I enjoyed it start to finish - well done! Warmest regards, CJ

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Melvina Germain 07 January 2008

Oh this is wonderful, I like this a lot. It flows, it's funny and you can picture the woofy dog. Melvina

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Carl Peckett 20 April 2006

This I like! woofy dog! : D

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Dan Tharp 14 April 2006

This is an entertaining children's poem. Nice rhythm to it. dan

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 13 April 2006

a very sweet poem...it flowed nicely and had a wonderful delivery...since i love dogs, this poem was especially enjoyable o read...well done!

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Shannon Chapel 11 February 2006

This is quite cute, Tan. A joy to read. Shannon

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