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In a quiet dream
I saw you walk toward
then pass yourself

There was no shadow
of your journey but I knew
where you'd been

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Ridge Cahill 21 January 2009

For me this is my favorite of yours and one of the best poems I have ever read on PH. It is simple, yet complicated and evokes some pretty intense feelings for me personally. Superb, Jerry, simply superb. Ridge

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Leonard Daranjo 21 November 2007

Great depth expressed in a few words. Absolutely compelling.

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Alison Cassidy 09 April 2007

The magic of intuition, captured to perfection in this fine example of 'less is more'. Sublime penning. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Nimal Dunuhinga 08 April 2007

Images do alive in dreams Jerry. Is the whole life a dream?

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