Lines made immortal
Through the test of time
We only know how true
Untill trouble dines with us
The earth that spins
Is the enforcer of all truth
Whenever we cross the line
Karma is the soldier
That haunts us down
And makes God fair
For the gloom fate of offenders
No matter who we are
The immortal lines are the proverbs known by all
Wise sayings that has lived on through generations passed
The immortal lines are the proverbs known by all Wise sayings that has lived on through generations passed Very powerful expressions cheers with 10+++++++
A lot of depth to this piece my man...well composed write...flows like a cool breeze..............nice work Ron 10++
Lines to venerate us Lines to show our path Lines to liberate our love And connect us to our past A deep and moving poem about the forces at work that shape our truths. An excellent read
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice extended conceptual metaphor: ''The immortal lines are the proverbs known by all Wise sayings that has lived on through generations passed'' well written poem....10