wardha jawdat

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Immortality - Poem by wardha jawdat

He rode planes;
Traipsing across the heavens
Dancing invisible waltzes with
Angelic dolphins.
He rode planes;
His escape from mortality
Complete and whole
Body and soul
He rode planes
Mortals in his vision few
Wispy fairies aplenty
The world of everchanging vistas
Of dreamy cottoncandy characters
Where every face wore a smile
And every sunbeam a wish fulfilled
He rode planes;
He lived a dream,
He died young,
He never knew
The ugliness
The pettiness
The disillusionment
Of those
Below.


Comments about Immortality by wardha jawdat

  • (9/1/2008 10:04:00 PM)


    When a writer as great as this puts pen to paper, the trees rejoice. For the know
    they shall not die in vain. A 10.

    GW62
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  • (4/16/2008 9:29:00 AM)


    Wardha I hope you are doin' fine-indeed an alarming absence

    Anxious rehan
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  • (4/7/2008 4:16:00 AM)


    The world of everchanging vistas
    Of dreamy cottoncandy characters
    Where every face wore a smile
    And every sunbeam a wish fulfilled

    It is truly an immortalizing breath of life

    Best-
    rehan
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  • Chan Jee (4/6/2008 2:36:00 AM)


    Hi, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , jawdat Wardha
    you have deep emotions.you have also broad vision.i appreciate you.
    please read my poems also and give your true remarks
    thanks
    bye
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 5, 2008



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