...***let There Be A Beginning***... Poem by wardha jawdat

...***let There Be A Beginning***...

Rating: 3.4

i have ached for you,
since time began
to have any meaning;
since the world began
to make any sense;
i have hungered for your look;
that look, which will tell me
that ive been birthed,
and christened.
that i've been sunkissed,
and pocketed,
in some recess
of your heart or mind...
i have lusted for your sentience;
for your lips to mouth a question
that will defeat my obscurity,
and define my existence to me.
for, since time began
to have any meaning,
and since the world began
to make any sense to me,
i have loved you;
and awaited you;
and dreamed you into godliness....
till, i have lost my soul,
till, i have lost my reflection,
till, i have lost all sense of reason.

Rinzu Susan Rajan 17 November 2008

pure and sincere like an everlasting blessing....

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Dr Kamran Haider 17 November 2008

Simply beautfiul and amazing... Loved the purity and sincerity reflecting through your words... Keep writing... Regards, Kamran

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Christine Austin Cole 16 November 2008

What a wonderfully presented piece. I just adore this... it is at once unique and universal, somehow wholly you and intimately familiar at the same time. You left a comment on one of my posts that surprised me (pleasantly) , but now it makes perfect sense to me that you found in it what you did. Thank you, Wardha... belatedly, for the comment and now, too, for sharing this. It's comforting, even though it leaves me aching. Christine

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Pierced my sanity, shattered me completely! ! !

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Ibrahim Bidu 06 February 2012

Let there be a beginning of the end of my suffering! hahaha.. Thought provoking!

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Afzal Shauq 11 April 2010

a sweet poem written with professional way..lovely and rich with meaningful idea..wonderful

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

dynamic...effusing true emotions

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Aijaz Asif 25 November 2008

uff....what a write mohtarma..a very touching poem which been read through the eyes and touched the heart specially the last three lines...beautiful, marvellous what should i call this cause this poem is beyond all these words...i loved it, added it and locked it in my most fav lists...10+++++++++++ na A++++++++++ ' till i have lost my soul till i have lost my reflection till i have lost all definition. ' - bravo, bravo, bravo thanks rgds asif

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Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

yes...that is love in Totality...of the most sublime state...any fraction soul yearns for, through out its journey here....well composed...insightful write, Wardha...10

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