***...An Idyllic Love....*** Poem by wardha jawdat

***...An Idyllic Love....***

Rating: 3.9

from the other side of sunshine
from the village behind the stars

i fancy your coming back to me
i fancy you pulsating in my heart

i fancy your eyes were sad when you turned to go
i fancy, and darling, i let those tears flow

i fancy your lips trembled as you muttered goodbye
i fancy you even kissed me and the pain flits by

i fancy i hurt you, i fancy your heart even i broke
i fancy thats why you left....not because you chose to go

i fancy the beauty of your desertion, i call it all love
i fancy it because i have nothing, if not that trust

.ah my love!
even this lonely eve
i fancy...................
from the other side of midnight
from the village behind the hills

i fancy you beckon alluringly
i fancy you loving me still........

....sometimes a broken heart needs denial to heal...

Sarwar Chowdhury 25 September 2008

woooo lovely! desparately emitting love! ..........10

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Wali Jamali 24 September 2008

Why fancy every thing? Why not try them whether they are real are not? Poem is thoroughly enjoyable. A good reading ride.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2008

a cry on fancied love, in desertion though, from the village behind hills to reach the village behind the stars...melodious...good piece with excellent rhyming, Wardha...10

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Beautiful conflicting feelings and very deep insight.Great rhyme-love the ending.a ten from me.

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Ershad Mazumder 19 September 2008

Very poetic. Try to be more poetic. I like your style.

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Saadat Tahir 01 July 2009

i fancy you pulsating in my heart actually your poem pulsates with want and love.....for the beloved and is very romantic its a very very nice poem...beautifully written cheers and ten

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Akram Saqib 10 March 2009

what feelings i can convey about your this great emotional poem? there is a pain and love vowen into words expressing itself.great1

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Aijaz Asif 16 October 2008

an excellent write deep composition ma'am....a thirst, wanting, needing, having then loosing....amazing 10+++ ' kuch he kuch mein sub kuch chala gaya pheley tum chaley gaye phir dum chala gaya' - aijaz

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Ravinder Malhotra 07 October 2008

You write well Wardha, but try keep the flow..... and should you be able to do so, your poems would be marvelous

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Ershad Mazumder 27 September 2008

Very good. But you could have made it more poetic and soothing.

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