...........Ode To Your Innocence***** Poem by wardha jawdat

...........Ode To Your Innocence*****

Rating: 3.5


You toy with the idea
Of being my Empathy
You congratulate yourself
For the humanity
You extend unto me

I smile at your eagerness
I marvel at your youthful face
I regret the coming dawn which will
Denude you abruptly of all grace

My senile world
O innocent fairy
ill keep veiled in my silence
and let you smile in your sleep
as deep as the gurgling Nile
while I stay up long into the dusks
and measure
the immeasurable..:
time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

ill keep veiled in my silence and let you smile in your sleep as deep as the gurgling Nile speechless

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Koyel Mitra 21 September 2008

Beautiful poem.Liked it.

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Aijaz Asif 23 September 2008

another beautiful write froma beautiful heat....thanks 10+'s

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Wali Jamali 24 September 2008

I regret the coming dawn which will Denude you abruptly of all grace This is really a wonderful poem.It reminds me of an 'Afsana' by Bano Qudsia where such a diabolical duplicity was the manifest of the write-up.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 26 September 2008

Ammmmmazing ode indeed...............10+

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Shahzia Batool 05 May 2013

Intense pen Wardha! ! !

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Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

Good poignant write Wardha...lot of obscurity inside...the expressions- i regret the coming dawn/ i let you smile in your sleep/ i will stay up long into the dusk- make sensible mystic poetic connections there...10

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Ravinder Malhotra 07 October 2008

Nicely penned and a poem with substance

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Waqas Naeem 03 October 2008

I regret the coming dawn which will Denude you abruptly of all grace beautiful poem....straight 10! cheers

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

beautiful wardha........

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