In Oblation Of Love For God Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

In Oblation Of Love For God

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He has gifted still we offer our love,
We surrender to him with glitter of smile,
Beauty of unity and trust motivates mind,
We are in pure oblation of love for God.

The white oleander flower nests in holy basil,
Creeper of bitter gourd flower keeps nectar,
Sacred fig tree leaves form crown of moment,
Flowering twigs of holy basil smile gently.

Five petals of wiled red flower drop dew,
Autumn prayer is offered before oblation,
Fig tree leaf gives reflection of devotion,
We offer our trust worthy efforts to God.

We feel brightness and perceive holy time.
Around petals of oleander flower light shines,
Leaves and flowers offered naturally smile,
Successful oblation is fragranced in holy basil.

Every holy basil leaf is energetic to heal mind,
Bitter gourd leaves and flowers plan to fruit,
Natural harmony is seen in beautiful buds,
Uniform blossom is graced by God in oblation.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,16 October 2017. All rights reserved.

In Oblation Of Love For God
Monday, October 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,philosophical ,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,15 October 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 16 October 2017

An amazing poem rich with striking images in natural setting..! The sublime tone echoed in this poem creates pulsating impact..the peace and harmony articulated in delicate sense makes it a great poem..I loved the piece of work so meticulously penned..regards

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Bill Khaki 06 October 2020

Life should be spent in oblation of God. He guides us with greater hope to attain eternal peace and bliss.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 May 2020

Autum prayers! ! With beautiful flowers of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Lovely oblation brings greatness. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 17 October 2017

Poet's keen observations of leaves and buds of nature's diverse plants are carefully crafted into the poem of great devotion. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 October 2017

Natural beauty is a great healer. Thanks for such find write, sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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