~ In Sunglass ~ Shoeing ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ In Sunglass ~ Shoeing ~

Rating: 4.8


~ In Sunglass ~ Shoeing ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
21 August 2010

Biblios ~ Banging
Visuals ~ Hanging.

Imageries ~ Gasping
Concepts ~ Hibernating.

Calories ~ Burning
Poetries ~ Nictating.

Shame ~ Shining
Conscience ~ Caricaturing.

Poets ~ Bibbing
Readers ~ Inebriating.

Eyes ~ Bilking
In Sunglass ~ Shoeing.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 23 August 2010

niv your up and flying with this spectacular

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 18 November 2012

A bewildering poetry... Definitely a differnt shade of poetic mind... I'm sure many poets have such feeling in some time... '...Eyes ~ Bilking/In Sunglass ~ Shoeing.'...here it climaxed.. Wow Sunglass shoeing...very aptly juxta posed... 10++

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Jenny Gordon 16 December 2010

Very interesting. Lovely summertime feel...like losing ourselves at the beach, only, it's in poetry. Fascinating perspective. The vocabulary wasn't easily comprehensible, but it was enjoyable.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 November 2010

You have shortlisted a few punches to make out a good poem. Keep it up.

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Ravi Sathasivam 02 October 2010

Interesting poem but nicely done Thanks for sharing with me

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Milica Franchi De Luri 28 August 2010

I love the way you force the reader to think about what you are saying in your poem....... brilliantly put together....

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