Tuesday, March 28, 2006

In The Begining Our Lord Was Alone Comments

Rating: 4.8

In the beginning our Father was alone wanting company.
So to Himself said, 'I'll just create friends to suit my fancy.'
They will all be Holy angels having freedom of choice.
These Holy angels will be perfect in beauty having a voice.
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Arthur Knackmus
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Larisa Rzhepishevska 25 April 2010

This poem is so beautiful, just great work. I love it. Thanks for sharing. God bless you! With warmest wishes, Larisa R

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Rachel Anderson 06 March 2010

wow this is a really good poem. i myself do not believe in god anymore but i can feel your passion towards it all. great work 10/10 :)

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Beauty Philosophy 02 February 2010

A beautiful poem stating the unparalleled power of GOD in creating something from nothing, unlike the 'weak' human beings...

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Anjali Sinha 21 January 2010

wowwww nice poem a new twist to the book of Genesis lovely to read

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Katellyne Baker 17 January 2010

Shows such meaning and explains life and a good way of expressing the way u feel about the lord

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Brittney Abrams 01 June 2009

absolutely beautiful. i understood everything in this poem and i think your an amzing writer who puts their heart and soul into writing. your a true poet.

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great thoughts in this poem great job..

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Tia Maria 13 November 2008

Great teaching in your poetry 10/10 :)

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Mary Murphy 10 November 2008

B-E-A-UTIFUL =) keep writing.

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Greenwolfe 1962 29 September 2008

A fascinating read and well written. The only question is to what purpose? GW62

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Arthur Knackmus

Arthur Knackmus

Olney Illinois U.S.A.
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