...In The Name Of Friendship (1) Poem by sholadoye Dada

...In The Name Of Friendship (1)

Rating: 4.9


It all started in the name of friendship
As fun in our compound
Seeing both merry-go-round
Acting as serious as convert
Sometimes it looks like courtship

It all started in the name of friendship
Now it’s turning to relationship
The intimacy is becoming profound
When he breathes, she’s around
Obviously, it showed in their converse

It all started in the name of friendship
But who will turn the name around?
With both engulfed in affection snip
Nursing it in covert
Waiting for first to propound

It all started in the name of friendship
Suddenly, there came a hitch in this friendship
It affected the fellowship
A small thing that should have no impact
But no one would say, “I’m wrong”

It all started in the name of friendship
Currently, there’s a reverse?
People in which affection abound
Now see each other to avert
Waiting for who calls the revert

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber {lil coastie]} 26 December 2009

i liked how u did the over all rhythm in this poem.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 December 2009

A small thing that should have no impact But no one would say, “I’m wrong”....................... simply truth as you paints art of human traits, friendship ruefully loses its strength by vision, beautiful write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Romeo Della Valle 27 December 2009

Great work, well penned, knowing for a fact that love always derives from an honest friendship, growing stronger (with its ups and downs) through time and remaining still a friendship...Two bodies embraced in one soul...keep it up! you got a great talent and plenty to show to the whole world...! ! ! 10++++

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Friendship is a fantastic fource indeed. Well said my friend.

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masked lady 01 January 2010

Very True, some loves like mine started from the name of friendship. Sometimes, someone would only hope, it would have been better if the friendship remain the way it is. Very nice poem! keep writing! GOD BLESS!

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masked lady 01 January 2010

Very True, some loves like mine started from the name of friendship. Sometimes, someone would only hope, it would have been better if the friendship remained the way it is. Very nice poem! keep writing! Thanks for sharing my friend.

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Arthur Crissey 30 December 2009

interesting poem it makes you look forward to the development of the relationship. you could even imagine a story or novel in verse.

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Louis Rams 28 December 2009

two poeople falling in love usually starts off as friendship. very good write.

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