Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 22,242 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

In The Path Of Light - Poem by Amitava Sur

A virtue which never dulls or die
Standing as a patriarch all along so high,
What is truth is a truth only,
Can never be stained by any lie.

Permanently it persists as a bold and beauty
While lie is always so mean and a sly.
These two always distance each other
Maintaining a wide parallel line.

Truth is ever - lasting
Being so joyful with a gleam.
And lie, being so treacherous and mean,
Existing though but very short lived.

Truth shows the path towards
Liberation and ultimate peace of mind,
Finally connecting the soul
With the Absolute, divine.

Sticking to lie and negotiating it,
This life ends up
With all distress, miseries and pains.

What is truth is a truth only,
Can never be stained by any means.
Truth persists, truth exists
So bold and beautiful is this Truth.
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Amitava (6.11.2015)

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Topic(s) of this poem: truth

Form: Free Verse


Comments about In The Path Of Light by Amitava Sur

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (11/10/2015 3:21:00 AM)


    A good comparative poem on truth and lie comprising several facts that one should remember to distinguish between the two. Well said. (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (11/26/2015 11:49:00 PM)

    Thank you, for reading and appreciating the poem with your lovely comment

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/7/2015 8:23:00 AM)


    A nice poem by Amitava Sur, thoughtful as well. (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (11/7/2015 10:07:00 AM)

    Thank you for appreciating this poem.

  • Jaishree Nair (11/7/2015 5:57:00 AM)


    Truth leads to the path of enlightenment. This theme sketched in simple lines.Thanks (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (11/7/2015 10:10:00 AM)

    Thank you Jaishree for appreciating my penning

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/7/2015 4:56:00 AM)


    Yes truth is truth only and truth holds true wisdom of trust. Finally connecting the soul
    With the Absolute, divine, shines in nice hopes and attitudes. Interesting poem shared./ 10
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    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (11/7/2015 10:11:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot for your liking my poem.

  • (11/7/2015 12:32:00 AM)


    Again, great wisdom in your words, Amitava! You are a philosopher through poetry! Perfect comparison between truth and lies, very insightful! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (11/7/2015 10:08:00 AM)

    Thank you for your valued comment on my pem

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 6, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 26, 2015


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