! In The Spirit Of Rumi - 3 Poem by Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire

! In The Spirit Of Rumi - 3

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My Beloved said

When, my dearest one, you were asleep,
sleeping in Myself, I came to you

and looked into your mirror
to see whom I might see

and when you wake,
then you will see My breath

still moist upon
that mirror.

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god, and this was so gorgeous up until the 'mirror of your heart' in the last bit. i wonder if you couldn't clean the cheese out of it. i mean, the rest of this poem is pure wow. Jake

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David Taylor 22 March 2007

I like R, u, mi,1. But this one is also a breath of life. Thank you Michael.

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Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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