so there you are in
your pram or kiddikarria
nicely tucked up,
being talked to in that
that grown-ups grow down to
when that tingylingy, like
that stoopid thingy
dangling on your cot that
doesn't do anything else
and she switches her attention instantly
from who's mommy's little treasure then,
sticks this silver thing to block her ear
and starts talking to thin air
it must be either the fairies
who don't seem to be very helpful -
'oh darling don't say you forgot I
asked you specially...'
or she's going doolally and
the adult world's not
what it's cracked up to be
I'll give her two minutes no more
You made me crack up... I liked the innovative touch...
Great work Michael! Rofer.
Brilliant perspective. Enjoyable and fun. -Eila
Well expressed..thanks for sharing
This was beutifull
nicely written.. keep it up
Very enjoyable. Different point of view.
A charming poem Michael, well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
This is so warm and yet iconoclastic...a poem to enjoy. Raynette